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The footprints left by you
Do not erode
Do not fade
They are an everlasting
Memory  etched upon your
Future  grave


                          So sing with me a sad song
                                Sing me  a lullaby
                                 I am alone in your bedroom
                                 Wanting to hold you, to feel you
                                  No tears coming down my eyes


I'm selfish
You were tainted water
   (tainted water never tasted so good)
You were my addiction
I couldn't face the dark
Without you
( You dried out, we sadly are through)

                                                 
                                          So sing with me a  sad song
                                                 Sing with me a lullaby
                                                  I am alone in your bedroom
                                                  With nothing to do
                                                  But cry

So here's another day
I spend away from you
Under moonlite skies
Your eyes
Hold
Broken
             hidden
                   Lies

                                              
                                              So sing with me something old
                                                    Sing me something new
                                                     "Our" moonlight shines bright
                                                       From a tree we'll hang ourselves tonight
So this poem is completely opposite of the song it was inspired by. But this is number 29 of my lyrical theme poems and inspirational line was This city, so pretty under moon-lit skies we'll be hanging like a cigarette. So yeah enjoy and stuff.....rest of song etc

:sing: This city, so pretty
Under the moonlit skies, we'll be hanging like a cigarette
So stunning, start running
Tonight's like a knife, would you cut me with your kiss?
I believe, red lips, you're unbelievable
Can't miss this chance to take you out, here's my invitation:sing:

Hello Brooklyn- All Time Low
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siriusdoombringer Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
Nice wordcraft, ma'am.
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
*bows* Thank you M'lord
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siriusdoombringer Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
I'm no lord.
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:shrug: I was being random xD
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siriusdoombringer Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009
I see that.
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
*nuzzles*
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siriusdoombringer Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009
Not on here, Princess.
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
sorry xD
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Cateyes27 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
oh my a few people are going to really compose it XD I want to hear their final product badly now! With your lyrics I'm sure it'll be great!
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
*bows* well thank you my kind lady x3
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Cateyes27 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
my pleasure ^^ hehe
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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Wolf-Horr Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
That. Was. Beautiful... :tears:
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the fave too hun as well as the comment!
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Wolf-Horr Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
:meow:
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:meow:
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ilovekrystal7788 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
so this is just from a song? not about anybody?
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Well inspiration was drawn from the song. I actually wrote this song myself but its kind of about someone
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ilovekrystal7788 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
like whom?
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
*smiles softly* I have no clue
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crazycello Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
these are beautiful lyrics! i would love to compose a melody for them!
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xoja Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist Interface Designer
That sounds like an ace idea - I should so do that too lol :D
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crazycello Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
may the best composer win!! :)
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xoja Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Yes! :D
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crazycello Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
heh heh heh heh... do you have finale notepad? thats what i use
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xoja Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Nope, just a guitar and voice :)
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crazycello Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
ahh, yeah i play piano cello and bass, but i fail at guitar. and singing. i might try and word this out on piano though, but finale notepad makes work a lot quicker, and its free! [link] try it!
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xoja Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I see, that's awesome - I pretend I can do the piano but my family will agree I'm lying to myself ;)

I will have a look at Finale and see what it's like, thanks for the heads up! :D

PS: [link] is my MySpace. :D
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:blush: Really? Thank you and I'd be honored if you composed a melody for it
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crazycello Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
sure! i have five days of thanksgiving break and im going no where so i might as well make them productive! i love the song very much by the way. i can never write lyrics; they always come out sounding so cheesy lol
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the fave also and it's very hard work writing lyrics but I totally know how ya feel about the cheesy part!
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crazycello Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
can i please have your email to send the finished product to?
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
sure my email is darkemoprincess12@hotmail.com
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crazycello Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
kk
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
^-^
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