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Hidden Lies in Truth

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Literature Text

I do not really want to hear
All the truths in your hidden lies
As my face bleeds the blackest tears
Your hands trace love upon my thighs
I look at you, with doll-like eyes
Yet  my persistence makes you work
You smirk as if your lips implies
Your  lies are my  hidden perks!
So this is not my best poem but this style is a Huitain. A Huitain has 8 lines. Each line has 8 syllables only.
Lines 1 and 3 should rhyme
Lines 2,4,5 and 7 should rhyme
Lines 6 and 8 should rhyme

This is number 35 of my lyrical themes! Inspirational line was We've had one chance to take back

Rest of the song:

:sing:we've had one chance to, take back, but over and over again
I'll clean your wounds tonight, so we can rewind it all 'till I come inside
I'll tear in two and never lie to you (cause you wouldn't take me home)
Your eyes are yet to be clear now (cause you want to take me home)
You were right and I wasn't listening (I never told you what you were missing)
:sing:

I Never Wanted to-Saosin
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Amduscian's avatar
yes, maybe not your best.. a bit cliché.
But good effort anyways, you write so much. xD I'm always glad to put something out once a month.